Hi im a 16 year old who has been writing for 3 years, last year after
being told by everybody i need to take rap seriously as i have a
talent i decided to go for it no matter what and sacrifice everything,
but obviosly i can still keep improving. Im even considering moving
out to the states from the UK to pursue this with everything ive got
as i have this deep gut feeling i will make it, theres nothing else i
want to do otherwise i would be depressed the rest of my life, Im also
going to give the UK scene a go and the chances are far greater i will
make it here than the US. the thing is i have learnt so many different
flows and i can rap in any way you ask me too, thats a part of my
talent, i can rap like eminem or speed rap and i have learnt to merge
both styles into my own. But the bad thing is i can do Eminems old
style soooo well i actually think my rhyme structure is as good as his
now (eminems my fave of all time so ive studied him) but i dont want
to be labelled a Eminem wannabe, ill give you a TWO SEPERATE small
sample of a verse of mine to eminem "just dont give a ****
instrumental"
Teenager with a retainer but a dream chaser
Either be major or remain a teamaker for retailers
Its Cheap labour,
Ima be greater
Live life bordering open seas, Smoking potent weed
Whilst your snorting up Coke And throating E
I wanna be more than a homeless bloke
O.D.D AND O.C.D
Overdosed on hopes and dreams
Stolen coat, and broken teeth
A week later ill be dangling from the ceiling
Family are grieving
They happened to peep in on saturday evening
Strangled not breathing
Im appealing like the apple of adam and eden
Tell me if you think i have talent considering my age, i mean you
never see SIXTEEN year olds rhyme well and i have been told i do and i
can make it due to my talent, note this is just ONE of many flows i
can rap in, so let me know your opinion, no trolls....thanks and love
people xxx
So not to sound to ignorant but i think im really good at this eminem
flow but i dont want to be labelled an eminem wannabe, but if eminem
had never done it i would still be considered really talented, what
shd i do?
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